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Post by M ! n t p e | t on May 12, 2009 17:04:51 GMT -5
-&&;;E C L I P S E P A W;;&& I’m tryin’ my best- • | The day was dreary; the Camp was lazy without the usual bustling activity. Rain pattered down on the floor of the forest, and mud splashed, puddles strewn across the flooring. Small, and large alike, wild life crouched in the protective shelter of their dens’ as they watched with misery at the falling rain-drops, tears. Whilst, cold but not wet, in the Medicine cat’s den sat WaterWeaver’s apprentice, staring out upon the wet and muddy atmosphere. His whiskers quavered as he inhaled the scents of the soaked forest; while many had their own worrying thoughts, he had his own. Reflecting on his conflicted thoughts on the miserable day, Eclipsepaw’s mind was made up of various worries, such as; What if I’m never a good Medicine cat? Like Water Weaver, I want to be a brilliant as her herself. A sigh sliding from his ivory-colored maw, the gray-silver apprentice was seated upon his strong haunches. The tom’s orbs, suitably as dark as the day it’s self, fluttered around the gray place; memorizing the scene of the den once more, even knowing it as a mere kit. His Mentor was Water Weaver, and, in his opinion, a wonderful Mentor; she was intelligent, and suddenly how solitary she was didn’t matter – Eclipse paw knew there was something... out of the ordinary with ForestFire and WaterWeaver’s relationship, not that he going to bring that up with the quiet she-cat. The silent dripping of rain and crackle of thunder seemed like the only audible noise in the entire area and territory of DawnClan. His orbs flickering back over his shoulder, the tabby tom realized he was so close to the entrance of the Den, he was about outside and in the down-pour. Swallowing, the silvery tom whispered something, yet his lyrics weren’t loud enough to be heard anywhere, even inside his own den. The scenery was usually gorgeous; to Eclipsepaw it still was – a little rain wasn’t about to hurt the area. His mentor, he figured, was somewhere about; it seemed, as if, at that very moment, it didn’t exactly matter. Eclipsepaw was masculine; thickly pelted; and gray-silver, and many had said to him, “You look much more Warrior than you do Medicine cat!” and various other sayings, meaning exactly the same thing. The sun, although there, was veiled with fog and gray clouds; you wouldn’t be able to tell at what point it was in the day, but he had it perfectly memorized – it was a bit later than mid-day, sunhigh. Tail-tip twitching slightly, his limbs itched to be out in the sheeting rain, cold, wet,… he’d always had an odd personality exactly as this. He, in fact, wished to be in the outside, searching for herbs or something, to a simpler task.
As it drug on, he only became antsier, at least wanting to feel the rain. His ears pricked; the sound of a Clan mate! Finally, a possible task! He caught the swift glimpse of a familiar gray-like coat; one limb was held up in a exaggerated limp. “Ivycloud?” His lyrics held quiet rasp, the handsome creature padding toward his half-sibling. “Yup. Eclipsepaw?” His sibling’s words were spoken with pure idiocy; “No, Crowtail from RavineClan!” The young tom’s words were filled with sarcasm; he didn’t care if anyone took it harshly. “Good one,” His half-sister spoke simple words, the young she-cat Warrior clearly trying to get to her point — “Alright, what is it?” He stated, a polite business-like status seeming to take over the obnoxious tom-cat. “Well, I’ve got a thorn in my paw — see, the left one?” He nodded — a thorn?! Oh, how dignified from Warrior! “Alright, I’ll take care of it.” Although not what he’d intended to say, he settled with it. His pearly whites curled over the spike-like thorn in her paw-pad, her limb curled upward to see the pad, and pulled hard; crimson drops spattered the floor, and scarlet liquid pumped hotly out of the wound; she flinched away. “There, all done,” He muttered after cleaning the wound of the crimson drops, and she nodded and simply purred, “Thanks, Eclipse!” And he could hear – not to mention see her – bounding away. “Whatever,” He sighed, the den filled with a warm metallic perfume.XX.NoTeS.XX XX.Muse ; ; Pretty good~ XX.Puppet[ s ] ; ; Eclipsepaw, and a bit 'o Ivycloud. XX.For ; ; basically anyone, mainly Koi! XX.Music ; ; None. XX.Copy right ; ; (c) to Mintpelt; Abby. XX.Post comments ; ; a bit on the short side, but overall pretty.. great? xDD Hahah. Black and bold is Eclipsepaw -- Bold and Green is his sister, Ivycloud. Sorry if it's muddled or confusing; in my defense, I wrote it out on two different computers~ xDD XX.Plot ; ; Possibly coming -- still in the works. XX.Last comment ; ; Happy replying, as always! |
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Post by ♫ l< 0 ! ♫ on May 12, 2009 19:19:39 GMT -5
The slender and sleek she-cat rushed into the den, crashing into Eclipsepaw, as her pelt dripped many droplets of abandoned water. "Oh! My bad." she giggled as she sat herself up on her haunches. This medicine cat was sometimes labeled wise and knowing; but in reality; she was silly and energetic, even sometimes quiet, though. She shook the weeping rain water off her pelt, which swished all over the den and covered everything. Her hair stood up on it's end after the brutal shaking, and she looked three times her size. She let out an soft, laughing purr, as she began to rasp her tongue across her pelt to straighten it up. "I seen Ivycloud come through, did you help her?" she asked as she busied herself. Once she was done, she continued over to the stocks of herbs. "They are somewhat low..." she mewed as then turned to Eclipsepaw and added, "We need to go collect some herbs when the rain settles down later, we shouldn't leave right now anyways. ForestFire needs me to check a few wounds he got during patrol." Just as she said it, the chocolate colored tom came leaping into the entrance. "Good day you two." he meowed sternly as she padded over to the two cats. He may sound awfully mean and rough, but he is actually a little kit on the inside. His gaze went to WaterWeaver, then over to Eclipsepaw. WaterWeaver leaned over and gave a quick sniff to his wounds, which still dripped small scarlet drops. "Alright, time for a lesson, Eclipsepaw. What do we use for stopping the bleeding of wounds, and to stop any infections?" she meowed curiously as her whiskers twitched with amusement. Her eyes lit up with pride as she questioned the apprentice. ForestFire's slight grin turned into a smirk, as he saw all the attention Eclipsepaw was receiving. He averted his gaze to the distant forest as the rain poured down on it. He let out an deep sigh as he shook his head and pondered to himself. WaterWeaver continued focusing on Eclipsepaw, and barely noticed, as the rain continued to pound onto the forest, as if in an blood-thirsty battle.
Note:
*Not as long as hoped
*WaterWeaver is so oblivious xD
*Enjoy replying ;p
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Post by M ! n t p e | t on May 12, 2009 20:15:35 GMT -5
ECLIPSEPAW ! !
&&;If you want to live, let live.
If you want to go, let go.
I'm not afraid to dream, to sleep, sleep forever.
I don't need to touch the sky.
I just want to feel that high,
And you refuse to lift me.;&& [/color][/size][/center] |``Eclipse`` |He shot a death-glare at ForestFire for his idiotic smirk; “For bleeding, cobwebs, for infection, although many other’s, I’ll suggest Dried Oak leaf.” The apprentice’s words didn’t quiver with the urgency for praise he wanted so badly; he was calmly composed. The tabby tom’s orbs didn’t show any uncertainty whatsoever, in no form, although a slight prickle of doubt prodded him as if there was a thorn in his side. The handsome creature inspected ForestFire; his mentor was so oblivious! “Did you truly get injured on a border patrol, or have you resorted to injuring yourself to see a certain Medicine cat?” A wicked glint was in the Apprentice eye; would the older, warrior of a tom retaliate? “Oh, and, good day, WaterWeaver, ForestFire.” Smirk returning on his innocent expression, the seemingly insane tom shifted on his haunches, watching his silly mentor. The medicine cat’s Apprentice words seemed to have no filter whatsoever; a truly horrid thing, especially in their league of respect. Tail twitching lightly, the sarcastic tom’s smirk was suitably irritating — he hoped it would at least tick ForestFire off more than he would be from his first comment. He knew he had to be infuriated by now. The gray-silver fur of his was even darker in the veiled dreary cover of the day; his orbs reflected the light of the comment he made, and he was proud of it — “Mhm. I went there,” He chuckled, a deep sound, his vocals raspy, as he ignored the tom-cat now. “What do I need to do, WaterWeaver?” His lyrics rumbled, looking at his mentor with innocent globes. Eclipsepaw’s pearly whites were shown in that smirk, his salmon tongue rolling over his kissers as if spotting a juicy piece of fresh-kill; but this was so much better. He glanced back to ForestFire, but rested his gaze upon WaterWeaver — was she still oblivious? Lord! Hidden fury that his sarcastic joke did not go further and penetrate his mentor’s mind, he kept it under control; under the surface.
His respectfulness to the Warriors – not to mention others’ – had definitely hit a new low. For sure. Needless to say, ForestFire was probably about to rip his pelt off in the Medicine cat’s den! — oh well, he wouldn’t go down without a fight. XX.NoTeS.XX XX.Muse ; ; Pretty good~ XX.Puppet[ s ] ; ; Eclipsepaw. XX.For ; ; basically anyone, mainly Koi! XX.Music ; ; None. XX.Copy right ; ; (c) to Mintpelt; Abby. XX.Post comments ; ; a bit on the short side, but overall pretty.. great? xDD Hahah. Not as long as the first, slightly rushed. XX.Plot ; ; Possibly coming -- still in the works. XX.Last comment ; ; Happy replying, as always! |
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Post by ♫ l< 0 ! ♫ on May 12, 2009 21:08:56 GMT -5
ForestFire's pelt went up into a bristle, which made him like very broad, and powerful. But as this was going on, WaterWeaver merely mewed, "Splendid! Now, first take the cobwebs and-" she was cut off as ForestFire lunged at Eclipsepaw, as he hissed and spat at all of his comments. But before he could lay a paw on the apprentice, WaterWeaved whiped around and pounced onto the angery warrior, pinning him to the ground. "And what, do you think your doing?!" she spat as her fur stood on it's ends, and then quickly added, "Quit behaving like a kit! As for you,-" she turned her gaze to Eclipsepaw, "-You shouldn't be making comments to make him angery, nontheless!" She then calmed herself and let her pelt lay flat, as she stepped back off of the warrior. She took in an deep breath as she let out an frustrated sigh. She usually didn't let things get to her like this. ForestFire flinched at WaterWeaver's sudden turn of personality, as he raised to his feet. He hung his head in shame as he meowed, "I'm sorry, WaterWeaver..." he trailed off into his thoughts. The rain outside the den began to lighten up, though it was still slightly heavy, and could give anything under it a thorough washing. But as the rain decreased, the gushing winds raged.
ForestFire shot Eclipsepaw an final glare, then stalked off into the clearing, and disappeared in the blanketing of rain waves. WaterWeaver look at the apprentice, her pride turning into disappointment. "How could you behave like that? You know very well ForestFire has an short temper. Please don't do this again." she mewed softly as she gave Eclipsepaw an quick lick on the ear. "Mousebrained sometimes, I swear." she meowed, teasingly, as she went back to checking the herbs in the quiet den.
Notes:
*Definately not as I hoped XDD
*Change of attitudes= <3
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Post by M ! n t p e | t on May 12, 2009 22:36:58 GMT -5
E C L I P S E P A W ! ! !
&&;If you want to live, let live.
If you want to go, let go.
I'm not afraid to dream, to sleep, sleep forever.
I don't need to touch the sky.
I just want to feel that high,
And you refuse to lift me.;&& |``If you wanna live, let live. ``Eclipse is comin``| Eclipsepaw tried to dodge the lunge of the Warrior, a hiss emitting from his throat. He didn’t hang his head like ForestFire; simply stated, “I apologize, WaterWeaver, and I’m sorry I disappointed you.” Now he was playing the good guy, and he shot a icy look toward the chocolate-colored tom. He didn’t jerk away from her lap on his ear, although he felt like a kit, but he didn’t care at the moment. “ForestFire, allow me to fix up the wounds, now?” His tone had a underlying iciness, but his expression remained composed and polite, his tail-tip twitching lightly; funny how the sarcastic Apprentice could change so easily, whilst still stirring under the surface was his true personality. But, he had always seemed to know when it was time to quit, when he was crossing the line — but it seemed he lived for crossing a thick line. Looking expectantly toward his mentor, the young tom asked, “Dried Oak Leaf before cobwebs?” He tilted his head to the left, waiting for her to respond with their business. He watched as the dreary scene slowly became a bit lighter, and his tail flicked, a few simple lyrics flowing from his maw; “I suppose,” He shot a icy look at ForesFire, “It’s good you came in, in a way, although we wish no injuries on anyone, it was getting pretty boring in here.” His lips were held tightly together, and his orbs flicked back to the white she-cat that was his mentor. Eclipsepaw’s whiskers quavered, and, he dared to flick his ears toward ForestFire icily. “So, what happened on the Border Patrol?” His tone was drawn out with respectfulness, and his look seemed to say; “Let’s-talk-and-be-good-until-WaterWeaver’s-gone-we’ll-handle-this-later” and he shifted on his gray and white haunches.
|``ECLIPSE;; run;; eclipse;; comin;; on;;| The gray tom’s frame was pressed tightly against the wall that was furthest from the ivory Medicine cat and the chocolate warrior; his gray orbs flickered darkly toward the two. The inner parts of his limbs and stomach were covered with alabaster; his maw splattered with white paint; his appearance was simply that of a “Prince”; no scars, nothing, and he bursted with pride for that. Eclipsepaw’s thoughts, torn away from his appearance and vain thoughts, snapped back to the realistic scene before him — a awkward one, at that. A warrior, fallen in love deeply with a Medicine cat, sat injured in the den with his “love”; a not-supposed-to-be-there cat stood further from them, watching the scene with intelligent hues. Hah; he knew the situation all to well. XX..NOTES..XX [x].Muse ; Perfectly fine, thank ya xD [x] Words ; Unsure, to lazy to take a look. [x] Copy right ; © to Mintpelt; © of song goes to “Evanescence”~ [x] Post comments ; Nothing much; on the shorter side, but proud! [x] Last comment ; happy replyin’. |
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Post by ♫ l< 0 ! ♫ on May 16, 2009 16:03:36 GMT -5
"Eclipsepaw! Show him some respect." ordered WaterWeaver as she added, "Please hurry and show me how your going to go about healing ForestFire. Either way is fine with the herbs, though I would suggest the cobwebs before the dried oak leaves, so they can clean up the wound, then add the herbs." The white, slender she-cat turned to ForestFire, her expression mixed with anger, and pity. She knew all of his feelings for her too well. The relationship was forbidden, but to add to that; she didn't feel the same way for him. She cared for him as kin, but not to take on as a mate. "Please, don't do anything outrageous, ya dumb furball." she mumured to the chocolate tom, as she gave him a quick comforting lick on the ear. ForestFire's ears lit blush red, and with the warmth of them, he jerked away from her gaze. He couldn't bare looking at her, and not doing anything stupid. "On patrol, I was chasing off a small family of badgers. They won't be coming back soon." He shot at the apprentice, as he glared sternly at Eclipsepaw. He usually didn't get anger so easily, but somehow, this certain cat just set him off. Apart from the three cats; nothing else seemed to stirred. Tension and hatred filled the air as each gazed at one another. WaterWeaver looked straight at Eclipsepaw; watching every step he took; monitoring his progress of dressing ForestFire's wounds. She was very proud of him; and also held pride within her apprentice. Though, sometimes he got to her, she still pushed away her thoughts of any annoyance.
Notes:
*Horribly short
*Not that great of description
*Have fun replying anyways....? xD
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